It was a dark night when children were
going trick or treating on Halloween.
going trick or treating on Halloween.
When we went trick or treating the
Halloweeny came past us so then
we ran and hid behind a bush.
Then we turned around and nobody
was around we found a creepy house.
Shelan and I thought we should go inside
and have a look.
When we went inside we saw it
was full of bugs and left over food
in a giant pot.
Halloweeny came past us so then
we ran and hid behind a bush.
Then we turned around and nobody
was around we found a creepy house.
Shelan and I thought we should go inside
and have a look.
When we went inside we saw it
was full of bugs and left over food
in a giant pot.
The leftover food was green and slimy.
So when we saw the Halloweeny
crying and running past our window
Shelan and me realized he was very sad.
Shelan was so scared she screamed so loud.
At the end we walked home and went to sleep.
The next day when we woke up
Halloween was over and we waited for
Halloween to come back next year.
crying and running past our window
Shelan and me realized he was very sad.
Shelan was so scared she screamed so loud.
At the end we walked home and went to sleep.
The next day when we woke up
Halloween was over and we waited for
Halloween to come back next year.
The End
Hello, Ngahuia, My name is Ote. I really enjoyed your Halloween story it was kinda cool and scary. What kind of costume are you gonna be next year? I really liked the middle of the story. I hope you have a good day.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, Ngahuia, My name is Rae.
ReplyDeleteI loved your story and how you made your own monster and would love to know what happens next Hallowen. I loved reading it.
Hope you have a good day.